Kamis, 22 Juli 2010

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Cigarette smoking Should be Banned by Government

Many people in the world, especially a man is a smoker. Smoking is their habitual activity and they don't think about big negative effects due to smoking. Based on this fact, I think government should be banned cigarette smoking, because smoking leads to many diseases, causes spendthrift and makes dangerous to other people.

Smoking leads to many dangerous diseases for human. As we know, smoking is a process of inhaliing air which contains of many chemicals. The chemical causes many dangerous diseases and damages our body, for example damage your lung, your brain and your heart. It causes of lung cancer, heart disease and and high blood pressure. Another problem of smoking is to make addicted easily for smoker, so smoker difficult to left smoking.

The other reason that cigarette smoking should be banned is smoking makes people become spendthrift also. In this case, some of people who are smokers spend more than one pack a day. We can count that how much money which is spent by smoker. It's spendthrift spend money for useless thing.

On the other hand, people who are smoking can cause dangerous to other people or passive smokers. Someone who is smoking must be product of smoking. This smoke contains of chemical that more dangerous than smoker inhaled. People who are around the smokers draw on the smoke. So smoking is not only harmful for the active smokers but also more harmful on passive smokers.

There is no benefit for smoking at all. Smoking only makes people become sufferer, get many diseases and harmful to other people. Government should ban cigarette smoking

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