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Teenagers in City and Teenagers in Village

Many people said that teenager is a periode of age where someone finds self-inquiry. In this period, teenager get kind of problem. Many factors makes a teenager is different from the others. One of them is a place where they grow. There are some distinctions between teenagers growing up in the city and in the village. The differences are in association, attitude and their psychology.

Society depends on the place where the teenagers grow up. Commonly teenagers in the city follow a free milieu. They tend to think that they do not depend on their parents by joining their friends based on the similarity of hobby or likeness. In this case, they mostly tend to do negative things. negative thing is something that make ourself or other person get problem, for instance is engage in a gang fight that always happen in teens city.,It contrasts with teenagers in the village who far from noise. They do not know about gang, they want to make a friend with everyone that is kind according to them.

Because the society between them is not the same, it causes of a different attitude also. Besides they think not to depend on their parents a lot, they become impolite. Teens in city never distinguish when they speak,the way of speak to older is the same with their friend. But teens in village use a soft language like” krama language “ when they speak with older person. There is no term "younger must respect the olders" since they consider that all ages are the same. On the other hand, teenagers in the village are not like that; keeping their attitude is very important because their environment always teach them like that. Moreover,the way they dress is also more polite, unlike city teenagers who they just think about fashion even they do not think whether their dresses are polite or impolite.

The different society of teenagers in city and in village causes some physiology differences between them. Although they have the same age, their maturity is different. City teens are usually more mature than village one.Because they are accustomed to live independently without their parents. But sometimes they are precocious, it means that getting adult before reaching the age of 17, for instance, the city teen whose age is 15 year-old looks like more than 20 year-old since her performance becomes adult person.

Those are some differeces between city teenagers and village teenagers.commomnly teenager in city tend to do the negative thing and not impolite, but teenagers in village tend to good thing and more polite, but not all of them like that, it depend of each person.After we know about that, what kind of teenager do you want to be, city teen or village teen?