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Why Traffic Accident Happen?

Indonesia is one of country in the world that has high level of traffic jam. Almost in every roads in Indonesia is filled with vehicle. The great numbers of street users usually cause of traffic accident, but traffic accident caused by many factors. There are many factors cause of traffic accident such us human factor, vehicle factor, road factor and the last is climate factor.

The first factor cause of traffic accident is a human factor. Many accidents happen due to human error. As traffic user, they often do not obey the rule of traffic line. They do it because they do not know about the rule or deliberately break the rules, besides not obeying the rule. The accident happens because the driver isn't in good condition when driving. For example they're in sleepy condition or in drunk condition, it makes the driver do not concentrate in driving,. in sleepy and drunk condition the driver can’t operate the steering wheel well and usually the driver can’t see everything clearly,this condition often lead a car crash. it is the cause of accident.

The second factor that influences traffic accident is a vehicle factor. Commonly, traffic users do not check their vehicle before driving, whether their vehicle is in good or bad condition, whether their vehicle have expired or not. It's very important to support our saving in driving. Because there are many problems that usual happen on road, such as a flat tire and brakes are not working, this problem can be prevented if we always examine our vehicle. the bad condition of motor cycle cause of part of machine the motor not function well, it can influence when we driver.

The third factor that make traffic accident is road factor. The damage road like road hole and bumpy road definitely disturb the traffic users. Although the driver had been careful, but if the road is bad, it can lead an accident. For example of hole road, if we drive the motor cycle through the hole road, it must be happen a shaky, it can make the driver become unbalance and get fall in down. So it's one of cause the great number of traffic accident.

The last factor is a climate. In a bad climate like rain, our sight becomes uncomfortable?We can't see everything clearly. Rain also can reduce our visibility. So this can condition can make get an accident.

These some causes of traffic accident that always happen everywhere. From the four factors, the most important factor cause of accident is a human factor. So be careful when driving.