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What i’m going to do with my life ?

By : David McCullough

Education is a right choice for young person and become an essential part of success in life and career. Many different problem of society is solved by educated people. People need power to decide true.

Someone become wise and more experience when get older. In the school of life, most of us get knowledge, and also some important lesson we need to learn. There are some reason why someone believe going to college than individual, because in school someone become survive and does not have physical trial.According to the some high school graduate College is a scenic and academic achievement. College not only teach curriculum but also become the period of imagination , development of your skill, formation your physiology find your true self.

The different feature in American education between another is a system. In America education promotes and encourages creative independent thinking. First of all college provide training to achieve ones career ambition. The curriculum is flexible, so student can choose the best curriculum . beside that there are many program which can deeper knowledge and experience.
Education is not only in the classroom but also extracurricular. There is a great emphasis on teamwork and technology. Thus college helps to strengthen the theoretical knowledge and the practical skill that necessary to secure in a reputable company.

The curriculum Will be fun and entertaining. Everyone who enters the college star new life looks like a blank of paper. College give someone chance to be a different person. this chance opens many interesting roads, but there is only one road to choose.

Commitment to another five of studying is not easy choice. There many example of people become succeed without enters college and nevertheless managed to succeed. This is just probability, because we know that many people who quite from the college didn't become successful. May be, educations is just insurance for the future success. The insurance may become your lottery ticket.

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Why Traffic Accident Happen?

Indonesia is one of country in the world that has high level of traffic jam. Almost in every roads in Indonesia is filled with vehicle. The great numbers of street users usually cause of traffic accident, but traffic accident caused by many factors. There are many factors cause of traffic accident such us human factor, vehicle factor, road factor and the last is climate factor.

The first factor cause of traffic accident is a human factor. Many accidents happen due to human error. As traffic user, they often do not obey the rule of traffic line. They do it because they do not know about the rule or deliberately break the rules, besides not obeying the rule. The accident happens because the driver isn't in good condition when driving. For example they're in sleepy condition or in drunk condition, it makes the driver do not concentrate in driving,. in sleepy and drunk condition the driver can’t operate the steering wheel well and usually the driver can’t see everything clearly,this condition often lead a car crash. it is the cause of accident.

The second factor that influences traffic accident is a vehicle factor. Commonly, traffic users do not check their vehicle before driving, whether their vehicle is in good or bad condition, whether their vehicle have expired or not. It's very important to support our saving in driving. Because there are many problems that usual happen on road, such as a flat tire and brakes are not working, this problem can be prevented if we always examine our vehicle. the bad condition of motor cycle cause of part of machine the motor not function well, it can influence when we driver.

The third factor that make traffic accident is road factor. The damage road like road hole and bumpy road definitely disturb the traffic users. Although the driver had been careful, but if the road is bad, it can lead an accident. For example of hole road, if we drive the motor cycle through the hole road, it must be happen a shaky, it can make the driver become unbalance and get fall in down. So it's one of cause the great number of traffic accident.

The last factor is a climate. In a bad climate like rain, our sight becomes uncomfortable?We can't see everything clearly. Rain also can reduce our visibility. So this can condition can make get an accident.

These some causes of traffic accident that always happen everywhere. From the four factors, the most important factor cause of accident is a human factor. So be careful when driving.

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Teenagers in City and Teenagers in Village

Many people said that teenager is a periode of age where someone finds self-inquiry. In this period, teenager get kind of problem. Many factors makes a teenager is different from the others. One of them is a place where they grow. There are some distinctions between teenagers growing up in the city and in the village. The differences are in association, attitude and their psychology.

Society depends on the place where the teenagers grow up. Commonly teenagers in the city follow a free milieu. They tend to think that they do not depend on their parents by joining their friends based on the similarity of hobby or likeness. In this case, they mostly tend to do negative things. negative thing is something that make ourself or other person get problem, for instance is engage in a gang fight that always happen in teens city.,It contrasts with teenagers in the village who far from noise. They do not know about gang, they want to make a friend with everyone that is kind according to them.

Because the society between them is not the same, it causes of a different attitude also. Besides they think not to depend on their parents a lot, they become impolite. Teens in city never distinguish when they speak,the way of speak to older is the same with their friend. But teens in village use a soft language like” krama language “ when they speak with older person. There is no term "younger must respect the olders" since they consider that all ages are the same. On the other hand, teenagers in the village are not like that; keeping their attitude is very important because their environment always teach them like that. Moreover,the way they dress is also more polite, unlike city teenagers who they just think about fashion even they do not think whether their dresses are polite or impolite.

The different society of teenagers in city and in village causes some physiology differences between them. Although they have the same age, their maturity is different. City teens are usually more mature than village one.Because they are accustomed to live independently without their parents. But sometimes they are precocious, it means that getting adult before reaching the age of 17, for instance, the city teen whose age is 15 year-old looks like more than 20 year-old since her performance becomes adult person.

Those are some differeces between city teenagers and village teenagers.commomnly teenager in city tend to do the negative thing and not impolite, but teenagers in village tend to good thing and more polite, but not all of them like that, it depend of each person.After we know about that, what kind of teenager do you want to be, city teen or village teen?

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Let’s live healthy with mineral water

How many glasses of mineral water do you drink in a day? I think most of us just drink less than 8 glasses a day. There are many reasons why we just drink mineral water less than 8 glasses. The reason are someone prefer drinks baverage taste than water mineral,there is no time to drink water mineral because condition and etc. However, we must change our habit in drinking mineral water because it is miracle water which has many advantages for our body. Drinking 8 glasses minimally a day can keep our body healthy, prevent from many serious diseases and make us more beautiful.

Drinking of 8 glasses a day can keep our body healthy. Mineral water contains of many substances that make our body becomes healthy ,for example in making intestinal smooth, because water we drunk can help to digest nutrient. Besides that, enough mineral water can accelerate the work of the heart and blood circulation in our body so mineral water is very important to keep our body healthy.

In addition, bringing mineral water in our offices or our schools is also important. As we know that many people sell unhealthy beverages in many places. The unhealthy beverages that sold by many people contains of many chemical substances. It is better if we bring mineral water from our home, because it is more hygienic and healthy than the other beverages. So it can prevent us from many dangerous diseases that is caused by instant drink.

Besides making our body becomes healthy and prevent from many diseases, mineral water can make us more beautiful. Why does it so? It is because the water that we drink will be absorbed by the body so that the skin becomes moist, not wrinkled,and not dry because of the protection from sun. It makes us more beautiful, doesn't it?

Based on those considerations, there are many benefits of the water mineral and it is a good way to bring mineral water in our activity. It can make our life to be healthy and beautiful.
 

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Cigarette smoking Should be Banned by Government

Many people in the world, especially a man is a smoker. Smoking is their habitual activity and they don't think about big negative effects due to smoking. Based on this fact, I think government should be banned cigarette smoking, because smoking leads to many diseases, causes spendthrift and makes dangerous to other people.

Smoking leads to many dangerous diseases for human. As we know, smoking is a process of inhaliing air which contains of many chemicals. The chemical causes many dangerous diseases and damages our body, for example damage your lung, your brain and your heart. It causes of lung cancer, heart disease and and high blood pressure. Another problem of smoking is to make addicted easily for smoker, so smoker difficult to left smoking.

The other reason that cigarette smoking should be banned is smoking makes people become spendthrift also. In this case, some of people who are smokers spend more than one pack a day. We can count that how much money which is spent by smoker. It's spendthrift spend money for useless thing.

On the other hand, people who are smoking can cause dangerous to other people or passive smokers. Someone who is smoking must be product of smoking. This smoke contains of chemical that more dangerous than smoker inhaled. People who are around the smokers draw on the smoke. So smoking is not only harmful for the active smokers but also more harmful on passive smokers.

There is no benefit for smoking at all. Smoking only makes people become sufferer, get many diseases and harmful to other people. Government should ban cigarette smoking

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why traffic accident happen??

How many traffic accident which happen in one year ? yes so many. Do you know. why it's always happen? Many factors that cause of traffic accident, such us human factor, vehicle factor, road factor and the last is climate factor.

The first factor cause of traffic accident is a human factor. Many accident happen due to human error. As traffic user they often do not obey the rule of traffic line. They do it because they do not know about the rule or deliberately break the rules. beside not obey the rule. The accident happen because the driver isn't in good condition when driving. For example they're in sleepy condition or in drunk condition, it make the driver do not concentrate in driving, it is cause of accident.

The second factor that influence traffic accident is a vehicle factor. commonly, traffic user do not examine their vehicle before driving, whether their vehicle in good or bad condition? whether their vehicle have expired or not?that why? it's very important to support our saving in driving. Because many problem that usual happen in road is a a flat tire and brakes are not working, this problem can be prevented if we always examine our vehicle.

The third factor that make traffic accident is road factor. The damage road like road hole and bumpy road definitely disturb the traffic user. Although the driver had been careful, but if the road is bad so it can lead an accident. Many road everywhere were damaged, so it's one of cause the great number of traffic accident.

The last factor is not less important is a climate. In a bad climate like rain, our sight become uncomfortable. We can't everything clearly. Rain also can reduce our visibility. So this can condition can make get an accident.

These some causes of traffic accident that always happen everywhere. from the four factor, the most important factor cause of accident is a human factor. so be careful when driving.